My lilies and jasmines have wept in your absence
All through the night, in a melancholy sense
They wept and slept beside me in grief
You gave no chance for them to sleep in relief
They are still lying at the same place
As corpses do, with a pale face
They are dead, dear o dear in your wait
Wish they could’ve died under your gait
Weeping, I am so much in their wrath
Hope you walk one day in their flowery path
This is magical. How the flowers are weaved to have a moment of someone's touch or acknowledgment. Your work reminds me of classic poetry. You are such a charming writer.
ReplyDeletehi saru thanks a lot for the comment i hope i will write more such poetry going forward
DeleteBeautifully rhymed poem, reminded the lyrics of old telugu song :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sri Valli, it will be great if you can let me know what old telugu song is that, I will hear it
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