Those slender arms I wish,
Shall hold me one day
Those fruity lips I hope,
Shall gift me a lifetime kiss
Those tranquil looks I want,
To bind me to death
In such dreams, I do breathe,
You are living so beneath
My soul has been craven thus far
By a love that's serene as yours,
Hold me in your eyes and breath
We shall never part even by death
Shall hold me one day
Those fruity lips I hope,
Shall gift me a lifetime kiss
Those tranquil looks I want,
To bind me to death
In such dreams, I do breathe,
You are living so beneath
My soul has been craven thus far
By a love that's serene as yours,
Hold me in your eyes and breath
We shall never part even by death
Soulful...Lyrical and meaningful at the same time. You write beautifully.
ReplyDeleteThanks Saru for the comment
Deletewow!
ReplyDelete"Hold me in your eyes and breath;
We shall never part even by death"
capturing lines superb! superb!
keep writing & smiling always!
:)
Thanks Sowmya
DeleteThe poetry is just great..however, if you can work on your lyrical structure, it would be matchless.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Diwakar will work on lyrical style
Deletekpt wondering for while... :)
ReplyDeleteawesome
Hi Bahargav, thanks for the comments
Deletesimple and the same time its super... :)
ReplyDeletesimple and the same time its super... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Reema ji
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