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Thursday, December 20, 2012

I LOVE YOU


Hovering in the thoughts of love
That I can never attain
Hanging in the cradle of memories
That has given me pain
Clinging on the verge of love mountain
Not knowing, when I could die
Drenching in every drop of love fountain
Not knowing, when it would dry
Savoring each nuance, as the god of yours
Is keen to take me away
Saving each chance for little romance
As I want to live even in death
Even as ashes, I just want to hear you say
"I Love You"
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6 comments:

  1. RamyaDecember 20, 2012 at 10:31 AM

    Loved this line
    "As I want to live even in death" wonderfully written keep writing

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  2. Brad DuggDecember 20, 2012 at 10:38 AM

    Thanks Ramya

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  3. provoqdDecember 20, 2012 at 5:00 PM

    Hi Brad,

    Hanging, clinging, drenching and savoring. A lot of action happening in this game of love. Lovely poem.

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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  4. UnknownDecember 21, 2012 at 1:21 PM

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